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    Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Think I've finally got this dialed in.

    Have a first looksy. Find anything that doesn't look or feel right in grammer, syntax or flow, lemme know.

    http://www.pashnit.com/roads/cal/GazelleCallahanRd.htm

    Wonderful road, and was able to shoot some really neat photos of the region.




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    Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Btw, wondering how these work for ya? This is an improvement over what I was doing a year ago. Doing all the labelling, and going to a larger format map was suggestion from pashnites. Like the result. Note the Pacific Ocean in the top left corner.


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    Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Here's the four that I found in the article. As I've said before, I enjoy the "conversational" feel of your writing. It's more like listening to you tell the story, so no changes there.
    Paragraph 4- change to "It's an easy ride.
    Paragraph 16-change to "No switchbacks or extreme lean angles"
    Paragraph 18-change to " off to an endless"
    Paragraph 27- change to " I never used to"
    Another road I must ride. Thanks Tim.

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    Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Quote Originally Posted by FJRME
    Here's the four that I found in the article. As I've said before, I enjoy the "conversational" feel of your writing. It's more like listening to you tell the story, so no changes there.
    Paragraph 4- change to "It's an easy ride.
    Paragraph 16-change to "No switchbacks or extreme lean angles"
    Paragraph 18-change to " off to an endless"
    Paragraph 27- change to " I never used to"
    Another road I must ride. Thanks Tim.
    Think my 'n' key wasn't working that day.

    Thanks Bob! Snagged those.

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    Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Perfect timing to post this... just added this one to our Oregon route in July!!
    So to speak...

    Dangerous Curves

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    Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

    Quote Originally Posted by Tyler
    Perfect timing to post this... just added this one to our Oregon route in July!!
    "...Oregon route in July..." Okay, I must have missed another important thread!

    What part of July? Maybe we could hook up. We can keep you busy (riding) as long as you want!
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