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Old 06-20-2007, 10:23 PM   #1
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Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

Think I've finally got this dialed in.

Have a first looksy. Find anything that doesn't look or feel right in grammer, syntax or flow, lemme know.

http://www.pashnit.com/roads/cal/GazelleCallahanRd.htm

Wonderful road, and was able to shoot some really neat photos of the region.



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Old 06-20-2007, 10:24 PM   #2
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Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

Btw, wondering how these work for ya? This is an improvement over what I was doing a year ago. Doing all the labelling, and going to a larger format map was suggestion from pashnites. Like the result. Note the Pacific Ocean in the top left corner.

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Old 06-21-2007, 08:39 AM   #3
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Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

Here's the four that I found in the article. As I've said before, I enjoy the "conversational" feel of your writing. It's more like listening to you tell the story, so no changes there.
Paragraph 4- change to "It's an easy ride.
Paragraph 16-change to "No switchbacks or extreme lean angles"
Paragraph 18-change to " off to an endless"
Paragraph 27- change to " I never used to"
Another road I must ride. Thanks Tim.
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Old 06-21-2007, 08:59 AM   #4
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Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

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Here's the four that I found in the article. As I've said before, I enjoy the "conversational" feel of your writing. It's more like listening to you tell the story, so no changes there.
Paragraph 4- change to "It's an easy ride.
Paragraph 16-change to "No switchbacks or extreme lean angles"
Paragraph 18-change to " off to an endless"
Paragraph 27- change to " I never used to"
Another road I must ride. Thanks Tim.
Think my 'n' key wasn't working that day.

Thanks Bob! Snagged those.
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Old 06-21-2007, 01:51 PM   #5
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Re: Need some Pashnit proof-readers... Gazelle Callahan Rd

Perfect timing to post this... just added this one to our Oregon route in July!!
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Perfect timing to post this... just added this one to our Oregon route in July!!
"...Oregon route in July..." Okay, I must have missed another important thread!

What part of July? Maybe we could hook up. We can keep you busy (riding) as long as you want!
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